Here are some responses I submitted to the TOEFL e-rater and the scores they got. They go along with this blog post. They are a bit rough (I haven’t cleaned up my own notes) but I think you’ll get the point.
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly. I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places. It is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities. They ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment. Parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 4.0 starter
I respect the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly. I feel that the sole way to truly resolve this dilemma is to construct better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible facilities. It is almost impossible to find impressive schools in the country. The government currently has money for valuable things like science laboratories and fantastic libraries in cities. They ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment. Parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places.4.0 better vocab
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly. I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Schools are the bedrock of all academic systems. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places. It is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The country only has a limited range of places to learn. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities. These facilities give adolescents there an advantage. It is clear to see that they learn much more. Their test scores on university entrance exams are the highest in the entire nation. This means they can attend the best universities. The government ignores rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment. Students at those schools perform poorly. They struggle to learn advanced concepts. I think they have poor reading comprehension as well. They are unable to go to good universities. It is likely that they don’t enjoy impressive careers either. Parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 4.0 just long
I respect the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly. I believe that the only way to truly resolve this dilemma is to construct better schools. Schools are the bedrock of all academic systems. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible facilities. It is almost impossible to find inspiring schools in the countryside. The country only has a limited range of places to learn. The government currently has money for educational things like science laboratories and well-stocked libraries in cities. These things give adolescents there an advantage. It is obvious to everyone that they learn much more. Their test scores on university entrance exams are the highest in the entire nation. This means they can enroll at prestigious universities. The government neglects rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even rudimentary educational supplies like computers and athletic equipment. Students at those campuses perform poorly. They struggle to master advanced concepts. I think they have terrible reading comprehension as well. They are unable to go to desirable universities. It is likely that they don’t enjoy impressive careers either. Parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 4.0 long and better vocab
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, but I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places, but it is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities, but they ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment. Parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 4.0 starter and three buts
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, but I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places, but it is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities. They ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment, so parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 4.0 starter and two buts one so
While I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places, but it is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities. They ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment, so parents are concerned about their kids and go to bigger places. 5.0 starter and one while and one but and one s
While I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places. It is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities. They ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment, so parents are concerned about their kids and go to bigger places. 4.0 starter and one while and no buts and one so
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, but I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. While parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places, it is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities. They ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment, so parents are concerned about their kids and go to bigger places. 4.0 start and one but and one while and one so
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, but I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places. It is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. While the government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities, they ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment, so parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 5.0 starter and but, while, so
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, but I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places. It is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities, so they should not ignore rural areas all the time. When rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment, parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 5.0 starter and but, so, when
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, but I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places. It is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities, yet they ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment, so parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 4.0 but, yet, so
I like the ideas noted by Claire and Kelly, but I feel that the only way to truly solve this problem is to build better schools. Parents want their children to be educated at the best possible places, but It is almost impossible to find great schools in the country. The government currently has money for good things like science laboratories and nice libraries in cities, yet they ignore rural areas all the time. Rural schools like the one I attended lack even basic educational supplies like computers and sports equipment, so parents who are concerned about their kids go to bigger places. 4.0 but, but, yet, so